09-07-2018, 01:03 AM
I have amended the bill. The bill in its current state is visible in the post above.
Sheepshape
As per your suggestions, I have changed the sections relating to:
In regards to sabotage, I changed 'interfering' with 'significant disrupting'. I hope the language will allow for greater differentiation between an obnoxious spammer and someone with a more malicious intent.
McChimp
I added a section on 'inter-regionally prohibited act' to address your concern.
Sheepshape
As per your suggestions, I have changed the sections relating to:
- Preamble;
- Punishments;
- Treason;
- Sabotage;
- Espionage;
- Bribery;
- Blackmail;
- Fraud;
- Foreign interference;
- Perjury (which now goes into Misconduct);
- Unlawful disclosure; and
- Defamation (which now goes into Fraud).
- Contempt of court; and
- Vextagious behaviour (these may be removed depending on what state the judiciary takes in the future)
In regards to sabotage, I changed 'interfering' with 'significant disrupting'. I hope the language will allow for greater differentiation between an obnoxious spammer and someone with a more malicious intent.
McChimp
I added a section on 'inter-regionally prohibited act' to address your concern.