[Proposal] Criminal Code Amendment (December 2018)

[McChimp]

As discussed on Discord -- I'm willing to support I guess if it is at least made more clear that "c" only applies in situations where Lazarus has declared a formal state of war. As explained I feel the current wording is insufficiently clear on that.

Following discord discussions I have tried to specify a list of valid war targets to which the law may be applied.

[Arlo]

Thank you, looks better.

Can we maybe break it up a bit? Like so:

c. taking up arms against Lazarene operations which are:
i. conducted in the defence of regions with which we are allies;
ii. within regions with which we are at war;
iii. within regions that are allies of regions with which we are at war and with which we are actively engaged; or
iv. within regions that are protectorates of regions with which we are at war

Maybe change the wording a bit too? Eliminate passive speak etc. For example "regions with which we are allies" could just be "allied regions".

[McChimp]

Thank you, looks better.

Can we maybe break it up a bit? Like so:

c. taking up arms against Lazarene operations which are:
i. conducted in the defence of regions with which we are allies;
ii. within regions with which we are at war;
iii. within regions that are allies of regions with which we are at war and with which we are actively engaged; or
iv. within regions that are protectorates of regions with which we are at war

Maybe change the wording a bit too? Eliminate passive speak etc. For example "regions with which we are allies" could just be "allied regions".

There isn't a legitimate lower level of formatting, but I've made an effort to split up defensive and offensive actions and eliminated passive speech where meaning isn't lost.

[Arlo]

I'm comfortable voting for now.

[McChimp]

I motion to vote

[Ryccia]

I shall second this motion.

[McChimp]

A voting thread has been opened here.

Voting will end on Thursday the 7th of February at 16:53 EST.