+- Forums (https://nslazarus.com/old_forum)
+-- Forum: Second Floor (https://nslazarus.com/old_forum/forumdisplay.php?fid=112)
+--- Forum: Board Meeting Room (https://nslazarus.com/old_forum/forumdisplay.php?fid=19)
+---- Forum: Past Proposals & Discussions (https://nslazarus.com/old_forum/forumdisplay.php?fid=50)
+---- Thread: [Proposal] Criminal Code Amendment (December 2018) (/showthread.php?tid=482)
Pages:
1
2
RE: Criminal Code Amendment (December 2018) - McChimp - 12-03-2018
Arlo;4733 Wrote:As discussed on Discord -- I'm willing to support I guess if it is at least made more clear that "c" only applies in situations where Lazarus has declared a formal state of war. As explained I feel the current wording is insufficiently clear on that.
Following discord discussions I have tried to specify a list of valid war targets to which the law may be applied.
RE: Criminal Code Amendment (December 2018) - Arlo - 12-03-2018
Thank you, looks better.
Can we maybe break it up a bit? Like so:
c. taking up arms against Lazarene operations which are:
i. conducted in the defence of regions with which we are allies;
ii. within regions with which we are at war;
iii. within regions that are allies of regions with which we are at war and with which we are actively engaged; or
iv. within regions that are protectorates of regions with which we are at war
Maybe change the wording a bit too? Eliminate passive speak etc. For example "regions with which we are allies" could just be "allied regions".
RE: Criminal Code Amendment (December 2018) - McChimp - 12-03-2018
Arlo;4738 Wrote:Thank you, looks better.
Can we maybe break it up a bit? Like so:
c. taking up arms against Lazarene operations which are:
i. conducted in the defence of regions with which we are allies;
ii. within regions with which we are at war;
iii. within regions that are allies of regions with which we are at war and with which we are actively engaged; or
iv. within regions that are protectorates of regions with which we are at war
Maybe change the wording a bit too? Eliminate passive speak etc. For example "regions with which we are allies" could just be "allied regions".
There isn't a legitimate lower level of formatting, but I've made an effort to split up defensive and offensive actions and eliminated passive speech where meaning isn't lost.
RE: Criminal Code Amendment (December 2018) - Arlo - 12-18-2018
I'm comfortable voting for now.
RE: Criminal Code Amendment (December 2018) - McChimp - 02-02-2019
I motion to vote
RE: Criminal Code Amendment (December 2018) - Ryccia - 02-02-2019
I shall second this motion.
RE: Criminal Code Amendment (December 2018) - McChimp - 02-02-2019
A voting thread has been opened here.
Voting will end on Thursday the 7th of February at 16:53 EST.