Second verse, same as the first!
Acutally it's completely different from the first.
C'est la vie!
Section 2. Maintenance of citizenship
(1) A citizen shall maintain their citizenship should they continue to fulfill the eligibility requirements of citizenship.
(2) A citizen may apply for a leave of absence in a designated area. The Delegate may approve an application.
So neither of these clauses is outright objectionable, it's just not really clear what they
mean. What are the eligibility requirements of citizenship? Are they the things they had to disclose in the application? Are they activity requirements, which I think we should have? And what does a leave of absence
do? Does it exempt them from having to keep a nation alive? Are they allowed to log in and vote while on a leave of absence, or would that force an end to their leave?
Without further clarification, I don't see the purpose of this section and think it can be deleted.
Section 3. Removal of citizenship
(1) A citizen may make a formal application to the Delegate in a designated area stating their desire to renounce their citizenship. The Delegate shall comply.
(2) Within the first week of a calendar month, the Delegate shall conduct a review of all current citizens and shall remove the citizenship of persons who fail to meet the requirements necessary to maintain citizenship.
(1) is kinda silly. Citizens don't need to
apply to remove their citizenship. They should be able to just renounce their citizenship and then the [Citizenship Officer] will update their records. Renunciation of citizenship should be self-executing.
As for (2), this should also be the [Citizenship Official], not the delegate, and it's very odd to specify a particular timeframe. For one thing, if that official is busy or on vacation or unable to get to it during that one specific week, that means it just doesn't get done. For another thing, it means if someone moves their nation out of the region just after the check is done, they get to just... stay a citizen... for a whole nother month. And time itself is wonky - what is "the first week of a calendar month"? Is a week Monday-Sunday, or Sunday-Saturday? Is the first week the period in which the 1st of the month falls, or is it the first full week all of whose days occur in that month? Is it the first seven days of the month, whichever weekdays they fall on? Which timezone starts and stops this calendar week?
And... what are the requirements necessary to maintain citizenship, again? They haven't been laid out anywhere.
2 and 3 should be condensed and turned into something more like this:
Section 2. Maintenance and Removal of Citizenship
(1) Citizens must maintain a nation in Lazarus and must post at least once on the forum every 30 days in order to maintain their citizenship.
(2) Citizens may renounce their citizenship by public declaration. Renunciations take effect immediately, and the Citizenship Official must promptly update their records to remove the renounced citizen.
(3) The Citizenship Official must promptly remove any citizen who fails to meet the requirements to maintain their citizenship, as laid out in this section.
(4) The Citizenship Official must promptly remove any citizen from their records whose citizenship is revoked by the Delegate following a finding of criminal behavior.
(5) The Citizenship Official must promptly remove any citizen from their records who has been banned from the Lazarus forum by its administration team.
[Side note: replace "the Delegate" with whoever we actually have that would do that; I'm a little fuzzy on exactly what's passed at this point regarding criminal stuff.]
I'm strongly in favor of a small post-count requirement to maintain citizenship. If we don't have that then the citizenship rolls risk being overburdened by an inactive, non-voting, non-participating populace and there's just no benefit to that kind of citizen. It's not that hard to track; it sounds like this forum can actually keep track of people who aren't meeting it, and we can also build that into a spreadsheet that lists citizens without much difficulty at all. I don't see a reason to restrict where they can post; a spam post should count as much as a governmental post, but having nothing at all just... why even bother.
Section 4. Appealing a denial of a citizenship application or removal of citizenship
(1) A person may appeal a denial by the Delegate of a citizenship application or removal of citizenship to the Assembly. The Assembly may overturn such decisions by three-quarters vote.
(2) A person may not appeal a denial by the off-site property administration.
I kind of covered this in my previous post; I don't think denials are likely to happen often enough that we really
need an appeals process right now, but I certainly am on board with one if people like the idea. I do think that this can go under Section 1, though, since they relate to the acquisition of citizenship, rather than a whole separate section. It may also make sense to change from "person" to "citizen or the denied applicant". I don't think an uninvolved 3rd party should be able to ask the Assembly to review why Joe Schmoe was denied, but Joe Schmoe should, and Lazarene citizens should always be able to raise things for discussion that are within the legislature's powers and duties.
Don't need (1); we can just create such an official - and should do so.
(2) is wrong. A three-quarters majority is 75% exactly, and a two-thirds majority is also that exactly. The only majority which requires a specification of +1 vote is 50% because an equal division of 50/50 isn't a majority at all - the specification of the additional vote is what creates it.
Think about it this way: 67/100 is a two-thirds majority. The two-thirds is met at 66.66666... votes, but you can't have a fraction of a vote, so the minimum required to pass the item is 67. But if you defined it as "66.666...% +1", then you would in fact be requiring
68/100 to pass, because you still can't get a fraction of a vote and 67.6666... rounds up to 68.
Same deal with 75%. 75/100 is a three-quarters majority, and so is 38/50. You don't need 39/50 because you met 3/4 at 37.5; you just have to hit 38 to get the next highest round number.
Given that, this section can just be deleted entirely.
Section 6. Constitutional law
(1) The Citizenship Act is a constitutional law, and further amendments to it must meet constitutional amendment requirements.
This is the first law where I think I actually support it being a constitutional law; I think the rights of citizenship are important enough to be protected at a higher level than most legislation. But I'm not sure if this really needs to be its own section - can't this just go in the preamble, that it's a constitutional law? And the mandate already defines what that means, so we don't need to say that amendments have to meet constitutional amendment requirements.