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[draft] [sc] Commend Imkiville

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The Security Council,

Duly noting that the government of Imkiville has produced several national and regional artworks that belong in a museum,

Recognizing, ImkivilleLazarus, a region torn apart by internal strife. Imkiville successfully overthrew then Delegate of Lazarus Killer Kitty, paving the way for a new government, that would heal many of the wounds from the previous conflict,

Applauding that Imkiville allowed natives that were previously banished to return to Lazarus, while simultaneously allowing those supportive of the previous government to remain,

Adding that even after Imkiville lost the position of World Assembly Delegate of Lazarus it still made contributions to LazarusLazarus that Imkiville created is still the government of Lazarus today,

Further recognizing, Inkiville's contributions to the South Pacific serving as Vice-Delegate, Local Councilor and Minister of Military Affairs,

Hereby commends Imkiville.
 
This could be reworded, perhaps in the following way?
Imkivilleunder the previous administrationsLazarus, while simultaneouslythose supportive of the previous government
I'd like to see some more meat on the bones on Imki's time with the SPSF - as it stands, it's kind of empty. Also, Imkiville is with an m and not an n :p

I'd also like to see some more research done in general, more detail about her work in Lazarus and with the SPSF. But it's good to see this draft, and I hope we can improve it and pass it in order to recognize Imki for her work.
 
Domais;9634 said:
The Security Council,

Recognizing, ImkivilleLazarus, a region torn apart by internal strife. Imkiville successfully overthrew then Delegate of Lazarus Killer Kitty, paving the way for a new government, that would heal many of the wounds from the previous conflict.

Applauding that Imkiville allowed natives that were previously banished to return to Lazarus, while simultaneously allowing those supportive of the previous government to remain,

Adding that even after Imkiville lost the position of World Assembly Delegate of Lazarus it still made contributions to LazarusLazarus that Imkiville created is still the government of Lazarus today,

Further recognizing, Inkiville's contributions to the South Pacific serving as Vice-Delegate, Local Councilor and Minister of Military Affairs.

Hereby commends Imkiville.
 
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