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Lore-building; the Manuscript of Solarium
Topic Started: Jul 14 2017, 09:52 AM (265 Views)
Amerion
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Before man, before creanium, before terras, there was darkness.

Darkness was all-consuming.

In the darkness, there were three Beings.

Only three.

The Alphamex, the Deltarex, and the Omeganex.

The Beings came together in the darkness, fusing themselves with one-another.

They exploded into a quadrillion energy specks.

The specks formed planets.

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To construct a preliminary lore-centered book, we should develop something like an origin story.

That is what I have roughly written, I encourage people to C+P that into a post, edit it to add your own wacky and creative stuff, and eventually we can have a story or something like that :P
Edited by Amerion, Jul 14 2017, 09:54 AM.
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Aumelodia
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Before man, before creanium, before terras, there was darkness.

Darkness was all-consuming.

In the darkness, there were three Beings.

Only three.

The Alphamex, the Deltarex, and the Omeganex.

These Beings came together in the darkness, fusing themselves with one-another.

They exploded into a quadrillion energy specks.

The specks formed planets.

The planets grew and flowered like many-petaled blossoms.

Some were large and some were small, but they all contained a spark of the Beings at their core.

In each, a civilisation arose.

Not one civilisation knew of another, and they remained separate in their ignorance.

They evolved into different sentient species.

Each flourished and advanced monumentally as civilisations.

They built grand cities and extravagant displays of their power.

Though one planet, in particular, was unique in its power, that it was incomparable to the others.

Space travellers from all sectors of space marvelled at its natural beauty.

All of the other civilisations of the time followed the teachings of one of the three beings, the one who spark formed the core of their planet

But this particular world followed the teachings of the Three Beings united, combined in their powers.

And from which, the Order of Stars was established.

The leader of this civilisation was a human named Lazarus.
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The13th
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Before man, before creanium, before terras, there was darkness.

Darkness was all-consuming.

In the darkness, there were three Beings.

Only three.

The Alphamex, the Deltarex, and the Omeganex.

These Beings came together in the darkness, fusing themselves with one-another.

They exploded into a quadrillion energy specks.

The specks formed planets.

The planets grew and flowered like many-petaled blossoms.

Some were large and some were small, but they all contained a spark of the Beings at their core.

In each, a civilisation arose.

Not one civilisation knew of another, and they remained separate in their ignorance.

They evolved into different sentient species.

Each flourished and advanced monumentally as civilisations.

They built grand cities and extravagant displays of their power.

Though one planet, in particular, was unique in its power, that it was incomparable to the others.

Space travellers from all sectors of space marvelled at its natural beauty.

All of the other civilisations of the time followed the teachings of one of the three beings, the one who spark formed the core of their planet

But this particular world followed the teachings of the Three Beings united, combined in their powers.

And from which, the Order of Stars was established.

The leader of this civilisation was a human named Lazarus.

Lazarus followed the teachings of all three beings, wisdom, ideals, and most of all, powerful life.

(*Are you guys okay with that part? And take the stuff in parenthesis out lol) :)
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Amerion
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Before man, before creanium, before terras, there was darkness.

Darkness was all-consuming.

In the darkness, there were three Beings.

Only three.

The Alphamex, the Deltarex, and the Omeganex.

These Beings came together in the darkness, fusing themselves with one-another.

They exploded into a quadrillion energy specks.

The specks formed planets.

The planets grew and flowered like many-petaled blossoms.

Some were large and some were small, but they all contained a spark of the Beings at their core.

In each, a civilisation arose.

Not one civilisation knew of another, and they remained separate in their ignorance.

They evolved into different sentient species.

Each flourished and advanced monumentally as civilisations.

They built grand cities and extravagant displays of their power.

Though one planet, in particular, was unique in its power, that it was incomparable to the others.

Space travellers from all sectors of space marvelled at its natural beauty.

All of the other civilisations of the time followed the teachings of one of the three beings, the one who spark formed the core of their planet

But this particular world followed the teachings of the Three Beings united, combined in their powers.

And from which, the Order of Stars was established.

The leader of this civilisation was a human named Lazarus.

Lazarus followed the teachings of all three beings, wisdom, ideals, and most of all, powerful life.

(not sure what powerful life means ?)

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The13th
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Before man, before creanium, before terras, there was darkness.

Darkness was all-consuming.

In the darkness, there were three Beings.

Only three.

The Alphamex, the Deltarex, and the Omeganex.

These Beings came together in the darkness, fusing themselves with one-another.

They exploded into a quadrillion energy specks.

The specks formed planets.

The planets grew and flowered like many-petaled blossoms.

Some were large and some were small, but they all contained a spark of the Beings at their core.

In each, a civilisation arose.

Not one civilisation knew of another, and they remained separate in their ignorance.

They evolved into different sentient species.

Each flourished and advanced monumentally as civilisations.

They built grand cities and extravagant displays of their power.

Though one planet, in particular, was unique in its power, that it was incomparable to the others.

Space travellers from all sectors of space marvelled at its natural beauty.

All of the other civilisations of the time followed the teachings of one of the three beings, the one who spark formed the core of their planet

But this particular world followed the teachings of the Three Beings united, combined in their powers.

And from which, the Order of Stars was established.

The leader of this civilisation was a human named Lazarus.

Lazarus followed the teachings of all three beings, wisdom, ideals, and most of all, life.

The equilibrium between these three things granted him immense power, that helped him to lead the Order of the Stars.

Edited by The13th, Jul 17 2017, 02:51 PM.
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Amerion
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(Should se start another book on Lazarus' adventures?)
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Amerion
Jul 17 2017, 04:35 PM
(Should se start another book on Lazarus' adventures?)
(If you want to maintain the quasi-biblical tone, I would suggest you don't start a new book, but a new chapter, possibly even revisiting some of the story from another perspective. I'll contribute some later.)
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The13th
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Jul 17 2017, 05:42 PM
Amerion
Jul 17 2017, 04:35 PM
(Should se start another book on Lazarus' adventures?)
(If you want to maintain the quasi-biblical tone, I would suggest you don't start a new book, but a new chapter, possibly even revisiting some of the story from another perspective. I'll contribute some later.)
That sounds fine to just add a new chapter, and I can't wait to see what you can contribute Seraph! Good luck in the TSP Delegate Elections- I would vote for you if I could! :)
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The13th
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Jul 17 2017, 05:42 PM
Amerion
Jul 17 2017, 04:35 PM
(Should se start another book on Lazarus' adventures?)
(If you want to maintain the quasi-biblical tone, I would suggest you don't start a new book, but a new chapter, possibly even revisiting some of the story from another perspective. I'll contribute some later.)
That sounds fine to just add a new chapter, and I can't wait to see what you can contribute Seraph! Good luck in the TSP Delegate Elections- I would vote for you if I could! :)
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The13th
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What the heck it posted twice?! See what I'm talking about? The forums have been giving me trouble lately... :(
Edited by The13th, Jul 17 2017, 07:15 PM.
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Omega
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So I'll start the next chapter if y'all don't mind.

Lazarus lived on the world that shined like a star

For it radiated with the flame of the celestial being

And it was on this world that Lazarus grew
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